tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post2013613246905824894..comments2023-12-19T00:27:40.453-10:00Comments on .: I wonder.McGuirehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03095242258892600138noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-17394959855663696642011-03-05T00:51:38.209-10:002011-03-05T00:51:38.209-10:00This has grown on me a little from the first I rea...This has grown on me a little from the first I read it. I like the way you start out with clouds, move on to rain and end in puddles. I would have liked to see the gardening imagery carried down too. As much as I like the last two stanzas I wonder if this piece might not be more powerful if you left off the very last stanza. Oh, and don’t you mean direct <i>debits</i>? An interesting piece.<br /><br>Jim Murdochhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12786388638146471193noreply@blogger.com