tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post3684615714086241933..comments2023-12-19T00:27:40.453-10:00Comments on .: The Laughter Epidemic.McGuirehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03095242258892600138noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-2843149379661013132008-12-28T01:34:00.000-10:002008-12-28T01:34:00.000-10:00That is just brilliant!That is just brilliant!Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-74196988242476223302008-12-26T01:00:00.000-10:002008-12-26T01:00:00.000-10:00Meyy Xmas Colin. Hope you're happy to the bone. Lo...Meyy Xmas Colin. Hope you're happy to the bone. Love that line- happy to the bone. I'm going to ask everyone today if they're happy to the bone.Hugh McMillanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05353561780315527799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-22611435451381695162008-12-23T22:47:00.000-10:002008-12-23T22:47:00.000-10:00I like it too.xI like it too.<BR/>xRachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11803852725693518924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-74203632361507456502008-12-23T22:13:00.000-10:002008-12-23T22:13:00.000-10:00I like that, it paints a very vibrant image, i cou...I like that, it paints a very vibrant image, i could see it happening in Scotland or just as easily in MalawiCrafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-33058212833592376332008-12-23T19:24:00.000-10:002008-12-23T19:24:00.000-10:00It's a wonderful image, it really is. I'm not sure...It's a wonderful image, it really is. I'm not sure about 'herd'. I think you can do better. I always like inventing new collective nouns.<BR/><BR/>Could I also suggest you makes the last line: 'Soaked to the skin and happy to the bone' or something like that? The short line feels a bit off at the end.<BR/><BR/>Other than that, brilliant.Jim Murdochhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12786388638146471193noreply@blogger.com