tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post4324706564687752955..comments2023-12-19T00:27:40.453-10:00Comments on .: As we see it.McGuirehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03095242258892600138noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-21330364727725399272009-12-05T19:03:40.642-10:002009-12-05T19:03:40.642-10:00That's not true about the pebbles: if you pick...That's not true about the pebbles: if you pick up just one its colour alters, it loses its beauty. And a pebble doesn't get any better for being bigger. Your poem, thankfully, is not a pebble. It is complete in itself.Rachel Fentonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10046917627054462214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-36914989580915666922009-10-05T05:05:30.244-10:002009-10-05T05:05:30.244-10:00Why clutter it up? The more words you wrap around ...Why clutter it up? The more words you wrap around this the more chance you'll obscure the true meaning. No one notices the pebbles on the beach until they hold one in their hand.<br /><br>Jim Murdochhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12786388638146471193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-13564910531952690062009-10-05T04:44:02.242-10:002009-10-05T04:44:02.242-10:00Thanks Titus.
Cheers Jim.
It's straight to ...Thanks Titus. <br /><br />Cheers Jim.<br /><br />It's straight to the point this one. Not ambitious in the slightest. Is it cheeky to write down a wee observation like that. Is it really enough? I always assume so.McGuirehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03095242258892600138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-52100800631013076112009-10-04T22:24:23.320-10:002009-10-04T22:24:23.320-10:00I have a brother like that too. Yep, this one work...I have a brother like that too. Yep, this one works.<br /><br>Jim Murdochhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12786388638146471193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-86086728596941381972009-10-04T10:24:53.242-10:002009-10-04T10:24:53.242-10:00Loved it, resonates a lot for me because of the we...Loved it, resonates a lot for me because of the weirdness of having twins who are polar opposites.<br /><br />But even if that were not so, it is still a good piece.Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.com