tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post5966154254764573427..comments2023-12-19T00:27:40.453-10:00Comments on .: To be opened up, read, and discarded.McGuirehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03095242258892600138noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-11363290189239328272010-08-12T06:26:21.445-10:002010-08-12T06:26:21.445-10:00Hi everyone
Im new to the site. really looking fo...Hi everyone<br /><br />Im new to the site. really looking forward to meeting new people, seeing what they have to say and just really chilling on some social network other than facebook. bleh. like i said, i am me, now who are you?<br /><br />Peace out, Dennis from [url=http://www.myonlinepayday.com]My Online Payday[/url] website!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-39964797928636576282009-01-09T04:09:00.000-10:002009-01-09T04:09:00.000-10:00I like 'the meat of me'. Great phrase, perfectly p...I like 'the meat of me'. Great phrase, perfectly placed, packs a punch. More like that!Rachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11803852725693518924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-85400914676475329742009-01-08T17:23:00.000-10:002009-01-08T17:23:00.000-10:00i really hate jumped up F%$&*&S like that....i really hate jumped up F%$&*&S like that.<BR/>sorry i cant give you any any real constructive critism, im not a poet or a writer, i do enjoy reading your blogs. <BR/> was only joking bout posties by the way!!The Brokendown Barmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13729499535859152598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-5994066744915679202009-01-08T08:12:00.000-10:002009-01-08T08:12:00.000-10:00I no longer post. I might go back one day. I loved...I no longer post. I might go back one day. I loved it in many ways but in others way it was a joke. <BR/><BR/>We've all experienced late mail, missorted mail, lost mail, but dealing with it day in day out, with arrogant bullying managers with chip franchises on the shoulders, it's hard to endure. <BR/><BR/>An eye opening experience though, few years worth of fitness to work off yet.McGuirehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03095242258892600138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-12129238735461200672009-01-08T07:51:00.000-10:002009-01-08T07:51:00.000-10:00ahh the life of a postie eh?? at least yer finishe...ahh the life of a postie eh?? at least yer finished by opening time though!!!! u can spend the giros u stole on a few pints and some pickled eggs. easy life.<BR/>my mother tried to make me be a postman, if only to get me off the streets!!<BR/><BR/>boooo hissssssThe Brokendown Barmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13729499535859152598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-4928725702217434022009-01-07T11:52:00.000-10:002009-01-07T11:52:00.000-10:00Changed to 'pliable minds' makes more sense now. W...Changed to 'pliable minds' makes more sense now. <BR/><BR/>Work to be done.<BR/><BR/><BR/>Appreciate the comments.McGuirehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03095242258892600138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-76049032859974387352009-01-07T05:14:00.000-10:002009-01-07T05:14:00.000-10:00This one bowled me over. I did stagger up again at...This one bowled me over. I did stagger up again at <I>bread minds</I> - didn't suggest anything to me - but like McGuire I must return.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-46448092168438432262009-01-07T04:52:00.000-10:002009-01-07T04:52:00.000-10:00For mainly poetry: New PagesFor mainly short stori...For mainly poetry: <A HREF="http://www.newpages.com/" REL="nofollow">New Pages</A><BR/><BR/>For mainly short stories: <A HREF="http://www.duotrope.com/" REL="nofollow">Duotrope</A>Jim Murdochhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12786388638146471193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-52776828014160343692009-01-07T04:15:00.000-10:002009-01-07T04:15:00.000-10:00Cheers Jim.Definitely need to come back to this an...Cheers Jim.<BR/><BR/>Definitely need to come back to this and iorn it out. There are definitely a few glitches. Parts needing smoothed over and soldified.<BR/><BR/>I think I'll send the complete version to Ink, Sweat & tears. Without your suggestion I would never know, in fact, do you know of a good directory with a list of these poetry ezines or journals? I have a small back log but nothing major.McGuirehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03095242258892600138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-61187047634979410602009-01-06T21:32:00.000-10:002009-01-06T21:32:00.000-10:00Good block of poetic prose. I could nit pick but t...Good block of poetic prose. I could nit pick but that's all it would be, personal preferences, nothing major. Quite evocative this piece. <BR/><BR/>The only one thing that I think you might think about is 'bread minds' - it didn't really work for me but I loved the 'climbing the dragon' metaphor at the end.<BR/><BR/>Put it away for a bit then give it a critical read with a clear mind and send it out there. I think <A HREF="http://ink-sweat-and-tears.blogharbor.com/" REL="nofollow">Ink, Sweat & Tears</A> might like it.Jim Murdochhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12786388638146471193noreply@blogger.com