tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post8020902233316739780..comments2023-12-19T00:27:40.453-10:00Comments on .: When I was a girl.McGuirehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03095242258892600138noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30567906.post-2152077489520055332009-07-22T23:02:06.849-10:002009-07-22T23:02:06.849-10:00Yes, short and to the point. I like it.
You might...Yes, short and to the point. I like it.<br /><br />You might want to consider changing 'your lips' to 'my lips' or 'the lips' but that's my only thought. Or are you using 'your' to include the reader as an accomplice?Jim Murdochhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12786388638146471193noreply@blogger.com