A patient God in the rain; oblivious to the business shoes.
Like the gentle progress of an ocealiner across the atlantic.
The smallest most slow of comets glittering a trail across wet night pavement.
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I like this. I didn't notice the title at first which kinda confused me but I was fine after that. Not sure about 'most slow' - why not simply 'slowest'? - and yet I can see why you might have gone for it, for the sound.
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I like this. I didn't notice the title at first which kinda confused me but I was fine after that. Not sure about 'most slow' - why not simply 'slowest'? - and yet I can see why you might have gone for it, for the sound.
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