Thursday, June 16, 2011

A Snail on Easter Road.

A patient God in the rain;
oblivious to the business shoes.

Like the gentle progress
of an ocealiner across the atlantic.

The smallest most slow of comets
glittering a trail across wet night pavement.

1 comment:

Jim Murdoch said...

I like this. I didn't notice the title at first which kinda confused me but I was fine after that. Not sure about 'most slow' - why not simply 'slowest'? - and yet I can see why you might have gone for it, for the sound.